Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Rain Poem

                           Pounding, Dripping
                          Distracted faces,
                          Eyes peeled out the door and through the 
                                             windows, as fast as a jet plane, 
                                              Pouring rain and hail
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 5, 2011 at 5:35 PM

    sounds like the narrator is bored and he wants to go outside to play.

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  2. LindsayOctober 5, 2011 at 6:19 PM

    Haha. I love how it says "eyes peeled out the door" because it seems like EVERYONE was staring out the door!!

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  3. Miss. BOctober 5, 2011 at 8:00 PM

    Hey...I've heard this before!
    awsome poem DEV!

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  4. RenlluaOctober 5, 2011 at 9:29 PM

    yep those eyes really WERE on the sight outside!

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